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A Place in the Woods by ~mrcbax:iconmrcbax:



Here I stand at our home's gate wishing you here too,
to see what I see, and hear what I hear, and know the smells that I knew,
as I lay stretched out amid tall grasses all day long thinking of you.
A cool breeze blows through the trees high above my head,
and the grass bristles back up from where I've jumped showing the way that I've tread.
The grass is yellow, the trees rich green, the sky a dull blue haze,
but then that's how it usually is these hot and humid midsummer days.
I hear the crows cawing and other birds chirp as shelter they seek to find,
and a million other sounds pound at the ground creating the call of the wild I hear in my mind,
but off in the distance a low rumble warns as a storm draws steadily near,
and a stiffer wind now rushes while the trees say their hush hushes as a raindrop trickles down my ear.
An air that was once stale brings freshness back through,
as the storm steadily approaches with a unique smell all clean and new,
and the flies start to bite in the diminishing light as I sit hear still thinking of you,
and now at this hour I notice a pretty pink flower,
and I wish you were here so I could give it to you.
A nearby locust waxes his strings and strikes up his fiddle to play a mellow love song,
but time is so short I can't stop to listen, I've already dallied too long.
So back to my house as quiet as a mouse I go,
I'll wait for the time when you will be mine and more of this beautiful world I can show.
©2007-2009 ~mrcbax
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Submitted: May 24, 2007
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I originally wrote this on July 28, 1998. This would have been during my engagement before my wife and I were married. Yeah it's cheesy and silly and all that, but it turned out better than some of the stuff I wrote back then, so I thought I would share it. It has an interesting up tempo rhythm to it, or at least it does when I recite it back in my head.
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I love it! It's wistful and calming, and I like the details.
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Thank you, thank you very much. I think that's the nicest thing anyone has ever said about one of my poems.
Thank you, thank you very much. I think that's the nicest thing anyone has ever said about one of my poems.
^_^ You're very welcome!
Not cheesy...at least not to us chicks. Your wife is so lucky! And it's so sweet to see this and know that there are guys out there not afraid to share. Gives the rest of us chicks hope because there's got to be more than just one out there!

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Cute and cuddly, boys. Cute and cuddly.
Ha ha, shhhh, just don't let the other guys know, they might burn me at the stake and try to revoke my VIP pass to the manly man club lol.

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